AI by scoradh
Akutsu/Dan, PG-13, ~4100 words
Summary/Excerpt: So Akutsu mumbled something that might have been 'Hi' and might have been 'I'm a badass and I rule this school' but neither one of which could have stood up in a court of law. The bell rang, Dan jerked like a marionette on a string and bounced off to class. The navy of the Yamabuki High uniform seemed to make his legs go on forever, and the blazer swamped him.
My Thoughts: Akutsu is a hard voice to get right because he comes off as such a stereotypical bully in Prince of Tennis. This makes giving him depth and retaining how he speaks difficult but this writer really nails it. I love how Akutsu feels that Dan is a bad influence on him, but what he really means is that Dan is a good influence. And Dan is great here, just as sparkly and innocent as he is in canon, but with a touch more knowledge. The slight hints to Akutsu wishing that he had a better past are perfect. Even if you don't care for this pairing, read it anyway for the characterization. You won't be sorry.
 

Grace by Fire Tears
Zoro, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~3400 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Marine ships," she announced calmly. "Coming fast." Multiple arms abruptly grew from her regular arms, stretching out across the sea. The final hand on one chain held the spyglass up to the palm of another hand, where Robin had presumably placed another eye. "Only two. And I do believe that one of them belongs to Captain Smoker."
My Thoughts: I won't lie; this is a very, very sad story and there are multiple deaths. Multiple messy deaths. If such things are not to your liking, I would give this one a bye. But it's very well-written and not only are the deaths too realistic but the aftermath is too real. While all the Straw Hats are in this story, it focuses more on Zoro and how Zoro might handle tragedy.
 

Fan Dance by rilina_fic
Temari, PG, ~3200 words
Summary/Excerpt: Suna's shinobi are always surprised to learn that all three of Yondaime Kazekage's children are mid-to-long range fighters. It’s not a mystery why Gaara and Kankurou choose to fight from afar; the distance suits their personalities. Gaara keeps the entire village at arm's length with his sand, and Kankurou prefers to be unknown beneath his headgear and facepaint. But Temari's not a riddle like her siblings; everything about her is direct, brash, unashamed. It doesn't seem right that she can kill without ever being close enough to see her enemy's face.
My Thoughts: Temari is a character that, like Iruka, I don't much understand. So I'm happy to find stories that "explain" her to me. I like how strong and stubborn she's characterized in this and I loved all the talk about fans and how they're a woman's weapon. Temari and Kankurou seem to be characters that will forever be stuck in Gaara's shadow and maybe they're fine with that. But here, there's a story about a girl who's going to be the best she can be, even if she's Gaara's sister. All in all, nicely written story.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
 

Not One Stroke by star_in_my_soup
Sanada, Niou/Sanada, R, ~8400 words
Summary/Excerpt: He ran his hand lightly over the paper that he had placed on the floor, checking to see if it was lying perfectly flat and adjusting the paperweight accordingly. Being careful to sit up straight so that his back was perpendicular to the floor, he took the brush in his hand, dipped it in the ink, and closed his eyes for a moment to focus. Then, decisively but not too quickly, he allowed his brush to begin sliding across the paper, blotting the first stroke onto that blank white space.
My Thoughts: The Sanada in this story is a bit stodgier than I like but the sheer novelty of the pairing more than makes up for it. Niou is such a great character because he can easily be catalyst for nearly any plot. Niou's attempts to shake up Sanada's worldview are interesting; it's nice to see Niou being logical instead of simply a loose cannon. The theme of calligraphy and perfection through is good too. But I particularly like the ending, even though it isn't your typical happy ending.
 

Five's Bad Company by Guardian1
Nami, Merryshipping, PG-13, ~4900 words
Summary/Excerpt: Three things precipitate this: she is locked in a closet due to his inability to fix it, he is also locked in on the other side, and she is fumbling in the dark to hit him very hard on the head. Zoro, who could sleep through the end of the world, is their only chance of saviour as Luffy and Sanji buy supplies. There is also the fact that when you are both convinced you may be running out of air, it suddenly feels very real despite the actual air supply of closets. It is a sad thing to die in a closet with Usopp.
My Thoughts: This is an absolutely delightful story. The writer has a definite sort of flair and s/he nails the characterizations dead-on. The conversation between Usopp and Nami as they are stuck in a closet is hilarious and how she bullies him into admitting that he just might be interested in the other crew members is priceless. Zoro's outraged protestations at being dragged into everything are perfect. The story ends on a perfect note. Read this story for the banter, folks, it's great.
Secondary Link: story @ livejournal


The Lies That Bind by Guardian1
Nami/Usopp, PG-13, ~2300 words
Summary/Excerpt: "So then I, great Captain Usopp - not just the feared leader of eight million men, but renowned inventor genius - took her trembling hands in my own, and soothed her with my manly... soothing: 'No woman should have to fight violently (and actually now that I think about it you hit me all the time and maybe you will stop after this), but for you I shall put god-like power in your hands,' and with that I built the Clima T - Nami stop laughing.'"
My Thoughts: Yes, I know the pairing is unconventional. Please don't ignore it because of that. This story explores the relationship between Usopp and Nami and it is very well done. By the writer's own admission, Nami pretty much tops Usopp hard but Usopp very much doesn't mind. Their similarities are highlighted (families, practicality, weakness, drawing/writing) very nicely. I really like their observations of each other. And the love that is present throughout is so strong, that I can't help but love this story.
Secondary Link: story @ livejournal
 

talking for the dead by mercurial_wit
Sai, PG, ~870 words
Summary/Excerpt: 'Nice' is one of those words that is a cue to smile. Sai doesn’t think it's nice, the fact that two people can be so obsessed with a shared memory that they have to stay by each other's sides for the rest of their lives or risk it shattering.
My Thoughts: I will admit to having a strange liking for Sai, even though he's supposed to be Sasuke-lite. He is ideally positioned to observe Sakura and Naruto's obsession and this story really drives that point home. There are a lot of really insightful lines, I was tempted to quote the entire thing. The ending of this story, in particular, is a huge punch to the gut and, at the same time, something that Sai would entirely do.
 

Exit, Pursued by a Bear by Jon Carp
Shadowplay Girls, PG-13, ~2200 words
Summary/Excerpt: b: I understand all that, of course. The rose imagery is cliched and boring. NATURALLY they represent the vagina. And the school's motif is simply explained: danger, for behind every door, in every garden lurks a threat to the virginity. But LISTEN to yourself and to what I say: if the entire purpose is to grow up, then would a loss of virginity get in the way? Can one even accomplish the goal with one's virginity intact? I am, of course, being metaphorical.
My Thoughts: I adore the Shadowplay Girls in the series, so it's always thrilling to find good stories that feature them. This story is amusing, as they critique the show in the beginning and then begin to question their own existence as the story continues. After all, they are just shadows on the wall. I like the little funny bits in this story the best but overall it provides good thinking fodder.
Secondary Link: story @ Utena Fanfiction Repository
 

Surfacing by haruyuki
Yanagi Renji, Inui Sadaharu, Not Rated, ~2000 words
Summary/Excerpt: If he had been forced to stop and think more about the determination emanating from the boy like a tangible aura, Renji would have associated with wind, with mountains, with the cloudless sky above them that is the clearest, most innocent blue. It’s irrational, but he knows, right then, that this was a person who would never stop working for what they wanted, would not stop until he had risen through – had understood and turned inside out – this small, isolated world, of perpendicular white lines and courts and rules as clean-cut as numbers.
My Thoughts: This is a lovely short piece with some very good Renji introspection. There are also quite a lot of flashbacks to when Renji and Inui first met each other and I'm an absolute sucker for kid flashbacks. I particular like Renji's observations of Inui, both as a kid and as a teenager, and I particularly like his "justification" at the end of the story.

Stop Me If You've Heard This One Bef- oh by wrangler
Atobe Keigo, Hyoutei-centric, PG-13, ~9100 words
Summary/Excerpt: Ootori checks out his form before Shishido submits it, over lunch. Atobe is crowing over his sparsely filled form and Shishido shuts up him by telling him that it's easy for the village idiot to know his career path. Ootori winces and tugs his attention away by drawing thick, red lines through most of his pros/cons list. Shishido is somewhat dismayed at the loss of Spiderman and Wizard, but he really pitches a fit when Voldemort goes too.
My Thoughts: This story is so very, very hilarious. The career lists are absolutely inspired and the banter even more so. I admit to not caring much for Hyoutei in canon but when I read stories like this one, it makes me want to re-think my apathy. And I really like Atobe's struggle between what's expected of him for his career, what he wants for his career, and why tennis is more exciting to him than economics. Seriously, start the story for the humor, stay for the thoughtful Atobe characterization.
Secondary Link: story @ tenifriends
 

Lies by H.E. Gray
Umino Iruka, Iruka/Kakashi, PG-13, ~2700 words
Summary/Excerpt: Beta Intelligence does not look kindly on those who would put the village at risk, and jounins are notoriously unstable. Every jounin has hundreds of invisible strings tying them to the village; lovers who don't know the meaning of love, friends who report back every word – a spider web of deception and betrayal, and Iruka thinks he is born for this life.
My Thoughts: I've never much understood Iruka's character, nor understood why so many enjoy Iruka/Kakashi stories. But this story really made me sit up and take notice, and not just because it is written very well. The plot assumes that everything about Iruka is a lie and oh man, what a lie. It becomes more and more involved as the story progresses until the end twists a kunai into your gut. Trust me, though, you'll enjoy it.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
 

The Arrangement by maldoror_gw
Wufei, Heero/Wufei, NC-17, multi-chapter, complete
Summary/Excerpt: Yuy could control his emotions perfectly and was an admirable soldier, but he wasn't constantly taming and challenging and pushing himself to become any better. Heero was a weapon. He didn't have a purpose. He was a purpose. Sometimes, Wufei caught himself envying the simplicity and icy calm of that state of being. But he wouldn't trade it for the storm that gave him strength as it constantly ripped him apart. This was who he was.
My Thoughts: As far as I'm concerned, this is the Wufei fanfiction story out there. None of the others comes even close. Some people might not enjoy the story as it becomes very angsty at certain parts but me? I eat that stuff up with a spoon and beg for more. Maldoror writes a great Wufei and she writes a relationship between two anti-social, hard-headed, close-mouthed guys very well. Their constant miscommunication carries the plot and the conclusion is satisfying. This story is very long so if you start it, be prepared for a long read.
Secondary Link: story @ The Ventilation Shaft
 

These Are the Facts by suzukiblue
Hinata/Sasuke, Not Rated, ~2000 words
Summary/Excerpt: So Hinata Hyuuga was left on Sasuke Uchiha’s doorstep with one small suitcase, a brand-new marriage license, and a frightened expression. Sasuke slept on the couch and said nothing to her. She sat in the armchair and tried not to tremble. In the middle of the night, he woke with a noise that might’ve been a sob from anyone else, and she pretended to be asleep while he stumbled to the bathroom and threw up.
My Thoughts: Honestly? This might be my favorite short piece of fanfiction out of all the thousands of stories that I've read. I think it could be how the writer demonstrates the "moral" of the story through the interaction between Hinata and Sasuke. I think because there is a moral to the story and it hits you hard with the last line. Hinata and Sasuke's characterizations are kept complete through it all and I'm having a hard time figuring out why I love this story so much. I have no idea. Go read it and let me know if you figure it out.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
 

Strictly Speaking by sherrymarie
Usopp, Usopp/Zoro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Excerpt: Captain Usopp, Brave Warrior of The Sea, was not a coward. Strictly speaking. What others may incorrectly perceive to be signs of cowardice in him, were, in fact, nothing of the sort. If on occasion, he ducked below deck in the midst of one of the many marine attacks imposed on their ship, then it should be understood by anyone possessing even an ounce of sense that what he was doing was not hiding from the battle, but merely stepping away for a moment, out of the fray and subsequent distraction, in order to develop the best sort of strategy that would guarantee the crew victory over their attackers.
My Thoughts: The story is from Usopp's point-of-view and the absolutely epic sentences that he thinks are fabulous. I particularly like how he can effortlessly explain any of his actions in a more noble light. That he likes drawing Zoro shirtless is just a hilarious bonus.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
 

Five resolutions made and broken by Momoshiro Takeshi by kishmet
Momoshiro, Kaidoh/Momoshiro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Excerpt: "I bet... I bet you... you were staring at me!" says Momo triumphantly. One of his secret weapons when there's no other way out is to blame the person blaming him for the exact thing they're blaming him for. That hadn't worked out so well when he'd broken his mother's best lamp, but he feels confident that it will prove its effectiveness one of these days.
My Thoughts: This story made me grin so very, very much. I love kishmet's humor and the way she writes Momoshiro; it's so free and easy and Momo's so endearing. It was fun to see how Momo breaks each of his resolutions and the very end bit is just the icing on the cake.
 

Sacrilege by mami_san
Farfarello, Farfarello/Ran, PG-13/R, ~4600 words
Summary/Excerpt: "I could," Farfarello admitted, tracing a pale finger across his throat in a slow line. "I could kill them. It would be far too easy. But why would I? It's too boring. Besides, it is far, far crueler to let them live. God can destroy them more thoroughly than I ever could." He smiled, a chilling little twist of his lips, and turned back on Ran.
My Thoughts: I full believe Farfarello to be the hardest of all of the WK characters to write because it is so very easy to fall into his two-dimensional characterization. This writer, fortunately, doesn't fall into that trap; yes, she writes Farfarello as insane but he is logically insane and she makes it work. I love the word choices she uses for dialogue. And the ending is a little trite but the conversation between Farfarello and the priest (and later with Ran) is absolutely fantastic.
Secondary Link: story @ patterns of blood
 

The Best Damn Thing (or not) by reposoir
Marui/Jackal, PG, ~7600 words
Summary/Excerpt: Marui pops a bubble. He scans the area and runs off the court. The senpais don't seem to notice Jackal and his Gaijin girl standing near the clubhouse. Marui slicks back his hair and smooths his shorts. Mostly, he just frowns as Jackal grins from ear to ear.
My Thoughts: Far, far too often, Jackal and Marui are the forgotten members of Rikkai so it's great when good writers take them on. I really, really felt for Marui in this story; haven't we all been there, when we perceive a love interest as taking our best friend away? The ending, in particular, is really well-conceived. I got a wonderful glow in my heart when I read it. And the pop music bits were a lot of fun!

Invisible to the Eyes by haruyuki
Fuji Shuusuke, PG, ~1450 words
Summary/Excerpt: “Ahh, sorry I’m late,” he says, on the first day of senbatsu, as he arrives, laiden with an extra net and boxes of tennis balls, at the court where his group has already gathered. And then, to no one in particular, he adds, “I brought an extra carton of balls, just in case certain people here happen to slice too many in half.”
My Thoughts: A story with mini scenes involving Fuji. The bit I quoted above is, by far, my favorite part of the story. Such an utterly Fuji thing for him to say and the rest of the story follows good characterization too.
 

A Slight Spot of Excitement by daegaer
Schwarz, Not Rated, ~680 words
Summary/Excerpt: "You're boring," Schuldig said. "I think it's your real Talent. My God, you even wear suits off duty. You're like a black hole of boredom. Maybe you're Estet's secret weapon, boring people to death across the entire world."
My Thoughts: For such a short little piece, this story truly makes an impact. Essentially, Crawford teaches the rest of Schwarz a lesson and that lesson is that Crawford is that you do not insult Crawford. Not unless you're willing to reap the consequences, that is. And the consequences? Fatalistically hilarious.
 

Inen Seigi by somekindofen
Haruno Sakura, Team 7, PG, ~2700 words
Summary/Excerpt: For Sakura and Naruto, missing Sasuke is the same as loving Sasuke: an unfair, terrible and beautiful truth that cannot be realized in halves. Some nights, she thinks of Sasuke, bathed in ancient, ageless light and lying under the same brilliant sky. Of Naruto and herself, trying so hard to find him (that’s in, she thinks) but to no avail time and time and time again (that’s—?).
My Thoughts: I will admit up front, I have a hard time wrapping my mind around the central concept that this story encompasses. But regardless, there's some lovely characterization in this, with Team 7 and Team 10. It screams of circles and repetition. Sakura's search to find meaning in what has happened and to be assured that things will end up alright is heartbreaking. She has struck me as one of the more thoughtful characters in the Naruto universe so it seems entirely appropriate.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
 

Reformation/Reaffirmation by downjune
Wufei/OMC, Duo/Wufei, R, multi-chapter, in-progress
Summary/Excerpt: "So... Wu, does it bug you that you're in the slammer and the rest of us are wandering around like idiots trying to figure out what we're supposed to do with our lives now that we can't blow shit up anymore?"
My Thoughts: I know that I say a lot of stories are brilliant but this story is brilliant. It assumes that after Endless Waltz, Wufei is prosecuted for his crimes and sent to prison. Wufei in prison? Is very, very interesting. June is very good at portraying a semi-realistic prison atmosphere and retaining Wufei's core characterization. She also throws in some mystery and political intrigue but what really shines is Wufei and Duo's interaction. Whenever Duo visits Wufei, it's a good time.
Secondary Link: story @ mediaminer
 

Peanuts Gakuen by cest_what
Seigaku/Peanuts Fusion, G, ~1700 words
Summary/Excerpt: Patty scowled again. She fingered the bandana uncertainly. It had looked very cool on the shelf. It had little coiled green vipers on it, which she'd thought was neat; and it wouldn't matter that her fair hair was always in a tangle, if she started wearing a bandana.
My Thoughts: Yes, you're reading that header correctly. This story is a fusion between Prince of Tennis and the Peanuts comic. As in, the Peanuts characters are cast as the Seigaku regulars. It's brilliant and works so very well, particular Marcie as Inui and Peppermint Patty as Kaidoh. And the Golden Pair. See if you can guess which Peanuts characters are cast as them before you read. Succesful fusions are hard to do because characters don't always cross over well but that's not the case here.
 

Aftermath by ptps
Luffy/Usopp, PG-13, ~1200 words
Summary/Excerpt: Luffy had many different levels of anger. There was the usual outburstof boyish annoyance: the kind that was normally accompanied by scuffles and rough-housing and friendly noogies to the head. Then there was determined calm: a wry grin, narrowed eyebrows, a hand on the hat. Righteous anger, where the smirks turned to yells of fury and hoarse ire and hands changed to rock-hard fists; and finally, the death glare. The captain would be uncharacteristically silent, all focused boiling wrath, barely contained behind those inescapable dark eyes and rarely immobile body.
My Thoughts: I love how this story starts, taking the fight that was swept under the rug in the series and dragging it back out into the light. I think the ending could be stronger as it really leaves the reader hanging. I want some sort of resolution, dammit! But the difference between Usopp and Luffy's opinion on whether the fight should just simply be over is very interesting. Usopp is confused and Luffy, as always, is deadly certain.

Cold Dish Part 01 | Part 02 by maldoror_gw
Sanji, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~18,000 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Only the very best chef could aspire to become Lord Stone's personal cuisinier. To be honest, I'm not sure a mere mess-cook could fill this position, mister..." The steward's eyes dropped to a piece of paper in front of him, then he gave Sanji a long-toothed smile. "Mister Prince. My, what an interesting name. Yes-yes."
My Thoughts: Let's be honest - Maldoror is pretty much a legend in the fanfiction writing community. How she can take plots and infuse life and originality into them every single time is a mystery but delight to me. "Cold Dish" is no exception; it's a story about revenge to the death and beyond, Straw Hat style. And yet, and yet, there still is hope through the revenge and that's what makes this story satisfying. The focus is more on Sanji and Zoro than the whole crew but they all get to shine a bit.
 

Moving Forward by trinityhelix
Inui/Yanagi, Inui/Kaidoh, R, multi-chapter
Summary: Inui once predicted that seven years into the future, Kaidoh would be unbeatable in the tennis circuit. He was off by only six months.
Secondary Link: story @ trinitycross

Simple/Copy by brainbreaker
Kabaji Munehiro, Atobe Keigo, G, ~1600 words
Summary/Excerpt: "God! How hard can it be to follow a few simple instructions?!" That would be Atobe. But it wasn't directed to him, so it's okay to ignore it. At times like these, Kabaji simply tuned out all the extraneous noises (excluding key words like his name, or emergency words like 'help' or 'fire'); it was the best way to survive the dramatics surrounding the Hyotei tennis team, especially during this time of the year.

With No Mirror To See by lifeinwords
Kawamura Takashi, G, ~6000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: His father always told him that he was too easygoing, usually with a friendly whap upside the head. 'You've got to stand firm, Taka,' he would say, 'or people will think you're as limp as bad seaweed.'

Segue by panzer_kunst
Kirihara Akaya, Yanagi Renji, G, ~500 words.
Summary/Excerpt: This is the difference between Renji and Akaya: Renji says, "Forty-eight months, two weeks and five days," and Akaya says, "Four years," which is the approximate time that's elapsed since Renji had officially given up tennis.

Kunimitsu's Krusaderz by whisper132
Tezuka Kunimitsu, Fuji Shuusuke, Muromachi Tohji, Mizuki Hajime, G, ~2000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: At age 10, Tezuka wanted to be a rock star. When his family was asleep, he took out his tennis racquet, put on his headphones, and air guitared himself to exhaustion, falling asleep clutching his imagined instrument. His parents would find him in the morning and think he loved tennis.
Rec Notes: I love humor and this just cracked me right up.
 

Farfarello
Sacrilege by mami_san
Farfarello, Farfarello/Ran, PG-13/R, ~4600 words
Summary/Except: "I could," Farfarello admitted, tracing a pale finger across his throat in a slow line. "I could kill them. It would be far too easy. But why would I? It's too boring. Besides, it is far, far crueler to let them live. God can destroy them more thoroughly than I ever could." He smiled, a chilling little twist of his lips, and turned back on Ran.
My Thoughts: I full believe Farfarello to be the hardest of all of the WK characters to write because it is so very easy to fall into his two-dimensional characterization. This writer, fortunately, doesn't fall into that trap; yes, she writes Farfarello as insane but he is logically insane and she makes it work. I love the word choices she uses for dialogue. And the ending is a little trite but the conversation between Farfarello and the priest (and later with Ran) is absolutely fantastic.
Secondary Link: story @ patterns of blood
Added On: May 5th, 2008
 

Farfarello/Ran
Sacrilege by mami_san
Farfarello, Farfarello/Ran, PG-13/R, ~4600 words
Summary/Except: "I could," Farfarello admitted, tracing a pale finger across his throat in a slow line. "I could kill them. It would be far too easy. But why would I? It's too boring. Besides, it is far, far crueler to let them live. God can destroy them more thoroughly than I ever could." He smiled, a chilling little twist of his lips, and turned back on Ran.
My Thoughts: I full believe Farfarello to be the hardest of all of the WK characters to write because it is so very easy to fall into his two-dimensional characterization. This writer, fortunately, doesn't fall into that trap; yes, she writes Farfarello as insane but he is logically insane and she makes it work. I love the word choices she uses for dialogue. And the ending is a little trite but the conversation between Farfarello and the priest (and later with Ran) is absolutely fantastic.
Secondary Link: story @ patterns of blood
Added On: May 5th, 2008
 

Schwarz
A Slight Spot of Excitement by daegaer
Schwarz, Not Rated, ~680 words
Summary/Except: "You're boring," Schuldig said. "I think it's your real Talent. My God, you even wear suits off duty. You're like a black hole of boredom. Maybe you're Estet's secret weapon, boring people to death across the entire world."
My Thoughts: For such a short little piece, this story truly makes an impact. Essentially, Crawford teaches the rest of Schwarz a lesson and that lesson is that Crawford is that you do not insult Crawford. Not unless you're willing to reap the consequences, that is. And the consequences? Fatalistically hilarious.
Added On: May 4th, 2008
 

A Slight Spot of Excitement by daegaer
Schwarz, Not Rated, ~680 words
Summary/Except: "You're boring," Schuldig said. "I think it's your real Talent. My God, you even wear suits off duty. You're like a black hole of boredom. Maybe you're Estet's secret weapon, boring people to death across the entire world."
My Thoughts: For such a short little piece, this story truly makes an impact. Essentially, Crawford teaches the rest of Schwarz a lesson and that lesson is that Crawford is that you do not insult Crawford. Not unless you're willing to reap the consequences, that is. And the consequences? Fatalistically hilarious.
Added On: May 4th, 2008
 

Fan Dance by rilina_fic
Temari, PG, ~3200 words
Summary/Excerpt: Suna's shinobi are always surprised to learn that all three of Yondaime Kazekage's children are mid-to-long range fighters. It’s not a mystery why Gaara and Kankurou choose to fight from afar; the distance suits their personalities. Gaara keeps the entire village at arm's length with his sand, and Kankurou prefers to be unknown beneath his headgear and facepaint. But Temari's not a riddle like her siblings; everything about her is direct, brash, unashamed. It doesn't seem right that she can kill without ever being close enough to see her enemy's face.
My Thoughts: Temari is a character that, like Iruka, I don't much understand. So I'm happy to find stories that "explain" her to me. I like how strong and stubborn she's characterized in this and I loved all the talk about fans and how they're a woman's weapon. Temari and Kankurou seem to be characters that will forever be stuck in Gaara's shadow and maybe they're fine with that. But here, there's a story about a girl who's going to be the best she can be, even if she's Gaara's sister. All in all, nicely written story.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: June 25th, 2008

talking for the dead by mercurial_wit
Sai, PG, ~870 words
Summary/Excerpt: 'Nice' is one of those words that is a cue to smile. Sai doesn’t think it's nice, the fact that two people can be so obsessed with a shared memory that they have to stay by each other's sides for the rest of their lives or risk it shattering.
My Thoughts: I will admit to having a strange liking for Sai, even though he's supposed to be Sasuke-lite. He is ideally positioned to observe Sakura and Naruto's obsession and this story really drives that point home. There are a lot of really insightful lines, I was tempted to quote the entire thing. The ending of this story, in particular, is a huge punch to the gut and, at the same time, something that Sai would entirely do.
Added On: June 16th, 2008

These Are the Facts by suzukiblue
Hinata/Sasuke, Not Rated, ~2000 words
NOTE: I am adding this story in the Gen recommendations section, despite the story having a pairing, because I do not feel that this story is about the pairing. It reads more Gen than shippy and that is why I included it here.
Summary/Except: So Hinata Hyuuga was left on Sasuke Uchiha’s doorstep with one small suitcase, a brand-new marriage license, and a frightened expression. Sasuke slept on the couch and said nothing to her. She sat in the armchair and tried not to tremble. In the middle of the night, he woke with a noise that might’ve been a sob from anyone else, and she pretended to be asleep while he stumbled to the bathroom and threw up.
My Thoughts: Honestly? This might be my favorite short piece of fanfiction out of all the thousands of stories that I've read. I think it could be how the writer demonstrates the "moral" of the story through the interaction between Hinata and Sasuke. I think because there is a moral to the story and it hits you hard with the last line. Hinata and Sasuke's characterizations are kept complete through it all and I'm having a hard time figuring out why I love this story so much. I have no idea. Go read it and let me know if you figure it out.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: May 12th, 2008

Inen Seigi by somekindofen
Haruno Sakura, Team 7, PG, ~2700 words
Summary/Except: For Sakura and Naruto, missing Sasuke is the same as loving Sasuke: an unfair, terrible and beautiful truth that cannot be realized in halves. Some nights, she thinks of Sasuke, bathed in ancient, ageless light and lying under the same brilliant sky. Of Naruto and herself, trying so hard to find him (that’s in, she thinks) but to no avail time and time and time again (that’s—?).
My Thoughts: I will admit up front, I have a hard time wrapping my mind around the central concept that this story encompasses. But regardless, there's some lovely characterization in this, with Team 7 and Team 10. It screams of circles and repetition. Sakura's search to find meaning in what has happened and to be assured that things will end up alright is heartbreaking. She has struck me as one of the more thoughtful characters in the Naruto universe so it seems entirely appropriate.
Secondary Link: Full Text on fanfiction.net
Added On: May 4th, 2008

Haruno Sakura
Inen Seigi by somekindofen
Haruno Sakura, Team 7, PG, ~2700 words
Summary/Except: For Sakura and Naruto, missing Sasuke is the same as loving Sasuke: an unfair, terrible and beautiful truth that cannot be realized in halves. Some nights, she thinks of Sasuke, bathed in ancient, ageless light and lying under the same brilliant sky. Of Naruto and herself, trying so hard to find him (that’s in, she thinks) but to no avail time and time and time again (that’s—?).
My Thoughts: I will admit up front, I have a hard time wrapping my mind around the central concept that this story encompasses. But regardless, there's some lovely characterization in this, with Team 7 and Team 10. It screams of circles and repetition. Sakura's search to find meaning in what has happened and to be assured that things will end up alright is heartbreaking. She has struck me as one of the more thoughtful characters in the Naruto universe so it seems entirely appropriate.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: May 4th, 2008


Sai
talking for the dead by mercurial_wit
Sai, PG, ~870 words
Summary/Excerpt: 'Nice' is one of those words that is a cue to smile. Sai doesn’t think it's nice, the fact that two people can be so obsessed with a shared memory that they have to stay by each other's sides for the rest of their lives or risk it shattering.
My Thoughts: I will admit to having a strange liking for Sai, even though he's supposed to be Sasuke-lite. He is ideally positioned to observe Sakura and Naruto's obsession and this story really drives that point home. There are a lot of really insightful lines, I was tempted to quote the entire thing. The ending of this story, in particular, is a huge punch to the gut and, at the same time, something that Sai would entirely do.
Added On: June 16th, 2008


Temari
Fan Dance by rilina_fic
Temari, PG, ~3200 words
Summary/Excerpt: Suna's shinobi are always surprised to learn that all three of Yondaime Kazekage's children are mid-to-long range fighters. It’s not a mystery why Gaara and Kankurou choose to fight from afar; the distance suits their personalities. Gaara keeps the entire village at arm's length with his sand, and Kankurou prefers to be unknown beneath his headgear and facepaint. But Temari's not a riddle like her siblings; everything about her is direct, brash, unashamed. It doesn't seem right that she can kill without ever being close enough to see her enemy's face.
My Thoughts: Temari is a character that, like Iruka, I don't much understand. So I'm happy to find stories that "explain" her to me. I like how strong and stubborn she's characterized in this and I loved all the talk about fans and how they're a woman's weapon. Temari and Kankurou seem to be characters that will forever be stuck in Gaara's shadow and maybe they're fine with that. But here, there's a story about a girl who's going to be the best she can be, even if she's Gaara's sister. All in all, nicely written story.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: June 25th, 2008


Umino Iruka
Lies by H.E. Gray
Umino Iruka, Iruka/Kakashi, PG-13, ~2700 words
Summary/Except: Beta Intelligence does not look kindly on those who would put the village at risk, and jounins are notoriously unstable. Every jounin has hundreds of invisible strings tying them to the village; lovers who don't know the meaning of love, friends who report back every word – a spider web of deception and betrayal, and Iruka thinks he is born for this life.
My Thoughts: I've never much understood Iruka's character, nor understood why so many enjoy Iruka/Kakashi stories. But this story really made me sit up and take notice, and not just because it is written very well. The plot assumes that everything about Iruka is a lie and oh man, what a lie. It becomes more and more involved as the story progresses until the end twists a kunai into your gut. Trust me, though, you'll enjoy it.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: May 25th, 2008
 

Chang Wufei
The Arrangement by maldoror_gw
Wufei, Heero/Wufei, NC-17, multi-chapter, complete
Summary/Except: Yuy could control his emotions perfectly and was an admirable soldier, but he wasn't constantly taming and challenging and pushing himself to become any better. Heero was a weapon. He didn't have a purpose. He was a purpose. Sometimes, Wufei caught himself envying the simplicity and icy calm of that state of being. But he wouldn't trade it for the storm that gave him strength as it constantly ripped him apart. This was who he was.
My Thoughts: As far as I'm concerned, this is the Wufei fanfiction story out there. None of the others comes even close. Some people might not enjoy the story as it becomes very angsty at certain parts but me? I eat that stuff up with a spoon and beg for more. Maldoror writes a great Wufei and she writes a relationship between two anti-social, hard-headed, close-mouthed guys very well. Their constant miscommunication carries the plot and the conclusion is satisfying. This story is very long so if you start it, be prepared for a long read.
Secondary Link: story @ The Ventilation Shaft
Added On: May 13th, 2008

Reformation/Reaffirmation by downjune
Wufei/OMC, Duo/Wufei, R, multi-chapter, in-progress
Summary/Except: "So... Wu, does it bug you that you're in the slammer and the rest of us are wandering around like idiots trying to figure out what we're supposed to do with our lives now that we can't blow shit up anymore?"
My Thoughts: I know that I say a lot of stories are brilliant but this story is brilliant. It assumes that after Endless Waltz, Wufei is prosecuted for his crimes and sent to prison. Wufei in prison? Is very, very interesting. June is very good at portraying a semi-realistic prison atmosphere and retaining Wufei's core characterization. She also throws in some mystery and political intrigue but what really shines is Wufei and Duo's interaction. Whenever Duo visits Wufei, it's a good time.
Secondary Link: Full Text on Mediaminer
Added On: May 4th, 2008
 

Duo/Wufei
Reformation/Reaffirmation by downjune
Wufei/OMC, Duo/Wufei, R, multi-chapter, in-progress
Summary/Except: "So... Wu, does it bug you that you're in the slammer and the rest of us are wandering around like idiots trying to figure out what we're supposed to do with our lives now that we can't blow shit up anymore?"
My Thoughts: I know that I say a lot of stories are brilliant but this story is brilliant. It assumes that after Endless Waltz, Wufei is prosecuted for his crimes and sent to prison. Wufei in prison? Is very, very interesting. June is very good at portraying a semi-realistic prison atmosphere and retaining Wufei's core characterization. She also throws in some mystery and political intrigue but what really shines is Wufei and Duo's interaction. Whenever Duo visits Wufei, it's a good time.
Secondary Link: Full Text on Mediaminer
Added On: May 4th, 2008


Heero/Wufei
The Arrangement by maldoror_gw
Wufei, Heero/Wufei, NC-17, multi-chapter, complete
Summary/Except: Yuy could control his emotions perfectly and was an admirable soldier, but he wasn't constantly taming and challenging and pushing himself to become any better. Heero was a weapon. He didn't have a purpose. He was a purpose. Sometimes, Wufei caught himself envying the simplicity and icy calm of that state of being. But he wouldn't trade it for the storm that gave him strength as it constantly ripped him apart. This was who he was.
My Thoughts: As far as I'm concerned, this is the Wufei fanfiction story out there. None of the others comes even close. Some people might not enjoy the story as it becomes very angsty at certain parts but me? I eat that stuff up with a spoon and beg for more. Maldoror writes a great Wufei and she writes a relationship between two anti-social, hard-headed, close-mouthed guys very well. Their constant miscommunication carries the plot and the conclusion is satisfying. This story is very long so if you start it, be prepared for a long read.
Secondary Link: story @ The Ventilation Shaft
Added On: May 13th, 2008
 

An Element to a Set Part 01 | Part 02 by marksykins
Inui/Kaidoh, R, ~14000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: "I did not," Kaidoh hissed. "Inui-senpai has to concentrate on his studies now and I don't want to bother him. Shut up about things you don't know." Kaidoh walked faster, putting some distance between himself and the other two. He could almost feel them exchanging looks behind his head.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Secondary Link: story @ aparecium.com

Dash by starlighter
Inui/Kaidoh, Not Rated, ~840 words.
Summary/Excerpt: He goes back to Inui-sempai, who looks up from his Math book with no surprise on his face, as if he had been expecting Kaidoh all along. For all Kaidoh knows of him at this point, from all he has seen from his plays, he might.
My Thoughts: None at this time.

26.6 by meiface
Inui/Kaidoh, PG, ~740 words.
Summary/Excerpt: It may have seemed like an unlikely source, especially since the other boy was younger. But he was straightforward and often presented the simplest solutions to complicated problems. There was none of that "but how do you feel" crap, or any of it "maybe you should sit down and talk it out" nonsense. He and Kaidoh often thought alike.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
 

Surfacing by haruyuki
Yanagi Renji, Inui Sadaharu, Not Rated, ~2000 words
Summary/Excerpt: If he had been forced to stop and think more about the determination emanating from the boy like a tangible aura, Renji would have associated with wind, with mountains, with the cloudless sky above them that is the clearest, most innocent blue. It’s irrational, but he knows, right then, that this was a person who would never stop working for what they wanted, would not stop until he had risen through – had understood and turned inside out – this small, isolated world, of perpendicular white lines and courts and rules as clean-cut as numbers.
My Thoughts: This is a lovely short piece with some very good Renji introspection. There are also quite a lot of flashbacks to when Renji and Inui first met each other and I'm an absolute sucker for kid flashbacks. I particular like Renji's observations of Inui, both as a kid and as a teenager, and I particularly like his "justification" at the end of the story.
Added On: May 27th, 2008

Stop Me If You've Heard This One Bef- oh by wrangler
Atobe Keigo, Hyoutei-centric, PG-13, ~9100 words
Summary/Excerpt: Ootori checks out his form before Shishido submits it, over lunch. Atobe is crowing over his sparsely filled form and Shishido shuts up him by telling him that it's easy for the village idiot to know his career path. Ootori winces and tugs his attention away by drawing thick, red lines through most of his pros/cons list. Shishido is somewhat dismayed at the loss of Spiderman and Wizard, but he really pitches a fit when Voldemort goes too.
My Thoughts: This story is so very, very hilarious. The career lists are absolutely inspired and the banter even more so. I admit to not caring much for Hyoutei in canon but when I read stories like this one, it makes me want to re-think my apathy. And I really like Atobe's struggle between what's expected of him for his career, what he wants for his career, and why tennis is more exciting to him than economics. Seriously, start the story for the humor, stay for the thoughtful Atobe characterization.
Secondary Link: story @ tenifriends
Added On: May 27th, 2008

Invisible to the Eyes by haruyuki
Fuji Shuusuke, PG, ~1450 words
Summary/Excerpt: “Ahh, sorry I’m late,” he says, on the first day of senbatsu, as he arrives, laiden with an extra net and boxes of tennis balls, at the court where his group has already gathered. And then, to no one in particular, he adds, “I brought an extra carton of balls, just in case certain people here happen to slice too many in half.”
My Thoughts: A story with mini scenes involving Fuji. The bit I quoted above is, by far, my favorite part of the story. Such an utterly Fuji thing for him to say and the rest of the story follows good characterization too.
Added On: May 4th, 2008

Peanuts Gakuen by cest_what
Seigaku/Peanuts Fusion, G, ~1700 words
Summary/Except: Patty scowled again. She fingered the bandana uncertainly. It had looked very cool on the shelf. It had little coiled green vipers on it, which she'd thought was neat; and it wouldn't matter that her fair hair was always in a tangle, if she started wearing a bandana.
My Thoughts: Yes, you're reading that header correctly. This story is a fusion between Prince of Tennis and the Peanuts comic. As in, the Peanuts characters are cast as the Seigaku regulars. It's brilliant and works so very well, particular Marcie as Inui and Peppermint Patty as Kaidoh. And the Golden Pair. See if you can guess which Peanuts characters are cast as them before you read. Succesful fusions are hard to do because characters don't always cross over well but that's not the case here.
Added On: May 2nd, 2008

Simple/Copy by brainbreaker
Kabaji Munehiro, Atobe Keigo, G, ~1600 words
Summary/Excerpt: "God! How hard can it be to follow a few simple instructions?!" That would be Atobe. But it wasn't directed to him, so it's okay to ignore it. At times like these, Kabaji simply tuned out all the extraneous noises (excluding key words like his name, or emergency words like 'help' or 'fire'); it was the best way to survive the dramatics surrounding the Hyotei tennis team, especially during this time of the year.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added on: April 28th, 2008

With No Mirror To See by lifeinwords
Kawamura Takashi, G, ~6000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: His father always told him that he was too easygoing, usually with a friendly whap upside the head. 'You've got to stand firm, Taka,' he would say, 'or people will think you're as limp as bad seaweed.'
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added on: April 28th, 2008

Segue by panzer_kunst
Kirihara Akaya, Yanagi Renji, G, ~500 words.
Summary/Excerpt: This is the difference between Renji and Akaya: Renji says, "Forty-eight months, two weeks and five days," and Akaya says, "Four years," which is the approximate time that's elapsed since Renji had officially given up tennis.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added on: April 28th, 2008

Kunimitsu's Krusaderz by whisper132
Tezuka Kunimitsu, Fuji Shuusuke, Muromachi Tohji, Mizuki Hajime, G, ~2000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: At age 10, Tezuka wanted to be a rock star. When his family was asleep, he took out his tennis racquet, put on his headphones, and air guitared himself to exhaustion, falling asleep clutching his imagined instrument. His parents would find him in the morning and think he loved tennis.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added on: April 28th, 2008
 

Grace by Fire Tears
Zoro, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~3400 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Marine ships," she announced calmly. "Coming fast." Multiple arms abruptly grew from her regular arms, stretching out across the sea. The final hand on one chain held the spyglass up to the palm of another hand, where Robin had presumably placed another eye. "Only two. And I do believe that one of them belongs to Captain Smoker."
My Thoughts: I won't lie; this is a very, very sad story and there are multiple deaths. Multiple messy deaths. If such things are not to your liking, I would give this one a bye. But it's very well-written and not only are the deaths too realistic but the aftermath is too real. While all the Straw Hats are in this story, it focuses more on Zoro and how Zoro might handle tragedy.
Added On: July 1st, 2008

Cold Dish Part 01 | Part 02 by maldoror_gw
Sanji, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~18,000 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Only the very best chef could aspire to become Lord Stone's personal cuisinier. To be honest, I'm not sure a mere mess-cook could fill this position, mister..." The steward's eyes dropped to a piece of paper in front of him, then he gave Sanji a long-toothed smile. "Mister Prince. My, what an interesting name. Yes-yes."
My Thoughts: Let's be honest - Maldoror is pretty much a legend in the fanfiction writing community. How she can take plots and infuse life and originality into them every single time is a mystery but delight to me. "Cold Dish" is no exception; it's a story about revenge to the death and beyond, Straw Hat-style. And yet, and yet, there still is hope through the revenge and that's what makes this story satisfying. The focus is more on Sanji and Zoro than the whole crew but they all get to shine a bit.
Added: April 29th, 2008
 

Nami/Usopp
The Lies That Bind by Guardian1
Nami/Usopp, PG-13, ~2300 words
Summary/Excerpt: "So then I, great Captain Usopp - not just the feared leader of eight million men, but renowned inventor genius - took her trembling hands in my own, and soothed her with my manly... soothing: 'No woman should have to fight violently (and actually now that I think about it you hit me all the time and maybe you will stop after this), but for you I shall put god-like power in your hands,' and with that I built the Clima T - Nami stop laughing.'"
My Thoughts: Yes, I know the pairing is unconventional. Please don't ignore it because of that. This story explores the relationship between Usopp and Nami and it is very well done. By the writer's own admission, Nami pretty much tops Usopp hard but Usopp very much doesn't mind. Their similarities are highlighted (families, practicality, weakness, drawing/writing) very nicely. I really like their observations of each other. And the love that is present throughout is so strong, that I can't help but love this story.
Secondary Link: story @ livejournal
Added On: June 22rd, 2008


Merryship (Luffy/Nami/Sanji/Usopp/Zoro)
Five's Bad Company by Guardian1
Nami, Merryshipping, PG-13, ~4900 words
Summary/Excerpt: Three things precipitate this: she is locked in a closet due to his inability to fix it, he is also locked in on the other side, and she is fumbling in the dark to hit him very hard on the head. Zoro, who could sleep through the end of the world, is their only chance of saviour as Luffy and Sanji buy supplies. There is also the fact that when you are both convinced you may be running out of air, it suddenly feels very real despite the actual air supply of closets. It is a sad thing to die in a closet with Usopp.
My Thoughts: This is an absolutely delightful story. The writer has a definite sort of flair and s/he nails the characterizations dead-on. The conversation between Usopp and Nami as they are stuck in a closet is hilarious and how she bullies him into admitting that he just might be interested in the other crew members is priceless. Zoro's outraged protestations at being dragged into everything are perfect. The story ends on a perfect note. Read this story for the banter, folks, it's great.
Secondary Link: story @ livejournal
Added On: June 22rd, 2008


Luffy/Usopp
Aftermath by ptps
Luffy/Usopp, PG-13, ~1200 words
Summary/Except: Luffy had many different levels of anger. There was the usual outburstof boyish annoyance: the kind that was normally accompanied by scuffles and rough-housing and friendly noogies to the head. Then there was determined calm: a wry grin, narrowed eyebrows, a hand on the hat. Righteous anger, where the smirks turned to yells of fury and hoarse ire and hands changed to rock-hard fists; and finally, the death glare. The captain would be uncharacteristically silent, all focused boiling wrath, barely contained behind those inescapable dark eyes and rarely immobile body.
My Thoughts: I love how this story starts, taking the fight that was swept under the rug in the series and dragging it back out into the light. I think the ending could be stronger as it really leaves the reader hanging. I want some sort of resolution, dammit! But the difference between Usopp and Luffy's opinion on whether the fight should just simply be over is very interesting. Usopp is confused and Luffy, as always, is deadly certain.
Added On: April 29th, 2008


Usopp/Zoro
Strictly Speaking by sherrymarie
Usopp, Usopp/Zoro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Except: Captain Usopp, Brave Warrior of The Sea, was not a coward. Strictly speaking. What others may incorrectly perceive to be signs of cowardice in him, were, in fact, nothing of the sort. If on occasion, he ducked below deck in the midst of one of the many marine attacks imposed on their ship, then it should be understood by anyone possessing even an ounce of sense that what he was doing was not hiding from the battle, but merely stepping away for a moment, out of the fray and subsequent distraction, in order to develop the best sort of strategy that would guarantee the crew victory over their attackers.
My Thoughts: The story is from Usopp's point-of-view and the absolutely epic sentences that he thinks are fabulous. I particularly like how he can effortlessly explain any of his actions in a more noble light. That he likes drawing Zoro shirtless is just a hilarious bonus.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: May 11th, 2008
 

Monkey D. Luffy
Aftermath by ptps
Luffy/Usopp, PG-13, ~1200 words
Summary/Except: Luffy had many different levels of anger. There was the usual outburstof boyish annoyance: the kind that was normally accompanied by scuffles and rough-housing and friendly noogies to the head. Then there was determined calm: a wry grin, narrowed eyebrows, a hand on the hat. Righteous anger, where the smirks turned to yells of fury and hoarse ire and hands changed to rock-hard fists; and finally, the death glare. The captain would be uncharacteristically silent, all focused boiling wrath, barely contained behind those inescapable dark eyes and rarely immobile body.
My Thoughts: I love how this story starts, taking the fight that was swept under the rug in the series and dragging it back out into the light. I think the ending could be stronger as it really leaves the reader hanging. I want some sort of resolution, dammit! But the difference between Usopp and Luffy's opinion on whether the fight should just simply be over is very interesting. Usopp is confused and Luffy, as always, is deadly certain.
Added On: April 29th, 2008


Nami
Five's Bad Company by Guardian1
Nami, Merryshipping, PG-13, ~4900 words
Summary/Excerpt: Three things precipitate this: she is locked in a closet due to his inability to fix it, he is also locked in on the other side, and she is fumbling in the dark to hit him very hard on the head. Zoro, who could sleep through the end of the world, is their only chance of saviour as Luffy and Sanji buy supplies. There is also the fact that when you are both convinced you may be running out of air, it suddenly feels very real despite the actual air supply of closets. It is a sad thing to die in a closet with Usopp.
My Thoughts: This is an absolutely delightful story. The writer has a definite sort of flair and s/he nails the characterizations dead-on. The conversation between Usopp and Nami as they are stuck in a closet is hilarious and how she bullies him into admitting that he just might be interested in the other crew members is priceless. Zoro's outraged protestations at being dragged into everthing are perfect. The story ends on a perfect note. Read this story for the banter, folks, it's great.
Secondary Link: story @ livejournal
Added On: June 22rd, 2008


Sanji
Cold Dish Part 01 | Part 02 by maldoror_gw
Sanji, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~18,000 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Only the very best chef could aspire to become Lord Stone's personal cuisinier. To be honest, I'm not sure a mere mess-cook could fill this position, mister..." The steward's eyes dropped to a piece of paper in front of him, then he gave Sanji a long-toothed smile. "Mister Prince. My, what an interesting name. Yes-yes."
My Thoughts: Let's be honest - Maldoror is pretty much a legend in the fanfiction writing community. How she can take plots and infuse life and originality into them every single time is a mystery but delight to me. "Cold Dish" is no exception; it's a story about revenge to the death and beyond, Straw Hat style. And yet, and yet, there still is hope through the revenge and that's what makes this story satisfying. The focus is more on Sanji and Zoro than the whole crew but they all get to shine a bit.
Added On: April 29th, 2008


Usopp
Strictly Speaking by sherrymarie
Usopp, Usopp/Zoro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Except: Captain Usopp, Brave Warrior of The Sea, was not a coward. Strictly speaking. What others may incorrectly perceive to be signs of cowardice in him, were, in fact, nothing of the sort. If on occasion, he ducked below deck in the midst of one of the many marine attacks imposed on their ship, then it should be understood by anyone possessing even an ounce of sense that what he was doing was not hiding from the battle, but merely stepping away for a moment, out of the fray and subsequent distraction, in order to develop the best sort of strategy that would guarantee the crew victory over their attackers.
My Thoughts: The story is from Usopp's point-of-view and the absolutely epic sentences that he thinks are fabulous. I particularly like how he can effortlessly explain any of his actions in a more noble light. That he likes drawing Zoro shirtless is just a hilarious bonus.
Secondary Link: story @ fanfiction.net
Added On: May 11th, 2008

Aftermath by ptps
Luffy/Usopp, PG-13, ~1200 words
Summary/Except: Luffy had many different levels of anger. There was the usual outburstof boyish annoyance: the kind that was normally accompanied by scuffles and rough-housing and friendly noogies to the head. Then there was determined calm: a wry grin, narrowed eyebrows, a hand on the hat. Righteous anger, where the smirks turned to yells of fury and hoarse ire and hands changed to rock-hard fists; and finally, the death glare. The captain would be uncharacteristically silent, all focused boiling wrath, barely contained behind those inescapable dark eyes and rarely immobile body.
My Thoughts: I love how this story starts, taking the fight that was swept under the rug in the series and dragging it back out into the light. I think the ending could be stronger as it really leaves the reader hanging. I want some sort of resolution, dammit! But the difference between Usopp and Luffy's opinion on whether the fight should just simply be over is very interesting. Usopp is confused and Luffy, as always, is deadly certain.
Added On: April 29th, 2008


Zoro

Grace by Fire Tears
Zoro, Straw Hats, PG-13, ~3400 words
Summary/Excerpt: "Marine ships," she announced calmly. "Coming fast." Multiple arms abruptly grew from her regular arms, stretching out across the sea. The final hand on one chain held the spyglass up to the palm of another hand, where Robin had presumably placed another eye. "Only two. And I do believe that one of them belongs to Captain Smoker."
My Thoughts: I won't lie; this is a very, very sad story and there are multiple deaths. Multiple messy deaths. If such things are not to your liking, I would give this one a bye. But it's very well-written and not only are the deaths too realistic but the aftermath is too real. While all the Straw Hats are in this story, it focuses more on Zoro and how Zoro might handle tragedy.
Added On: July 1st, 2008
 

Hyoutei Gakuen
Stop Me If You've Heard This One Bef- oh by wrangler
Atobe Keigo, Hyoutei-centric, PG-13, ~9100 words
Summary/Excerpt: Ootori checks out his form before Shishido submits it, over lunch. Atobe is crowing over his sparsely filled form and Shishido shuts up him by telling him that it's easy for the village idiot to know his career path. Ootori winces and tugs his attention away by drawing thick, red lines through most of his pros/cons list. Shishido is somewhat dismayed at the loss of Spiderman and Wizard, but he really pitches a fit when Voldemort goes too.
My Thoughts: This story is so very, very hilarious. The career lists are absolutely inspired and the banter even more so. I admit to not caring much for Hyoutei in canon but when I read stories like this one, it makes me want to re-think my apathy. And I really like Atobe's struggle between what's expected of him for his career, what he wants for his career, and why tennis is more exciting to him than economics. Seriously, start the story for the humor, stay for the thoughtful Atobe characterization.
Secondary Link: story @ tenifriends
Added On: May 27th, 2008

Simple/Copy by brainbreaker
Kabaji Munehiro, Atobe Keigo, G, ~1600 words
Summary/Excerpt: "God! How hard can it be to follow a few simple instructions?!" That would be Atobe. But it wasn't directed to him, so it's okay to ignore it. At times like these, Kabaji simply tuned out all the extraneous noises (excluding key words like his name, or emergency words like 'help' or 'fire'); it was the best way to survive the dramatics surrounding the Hyotei tennis team, especially during this time of the year.
Added: April 28th, 2008


Rikkai Dai Fuzoku
Not One Stroke by star_in_my_soup
Sanada, Niou/Sanada, R, ~8400 words
Summary/Excerpt: He ran his hand lightly over the paper that he had placed on the floor, checking to see if it was lying perfectly flat and adjusting the paperweight accordingly. Being careful to sit up straight so that his back was perpendicular to the floor, he took the brush in his hand, dipped it in the ink, and closed his eyes for a moment to focus. Then, decisively but not too quickly, he allowed his brush to begin sliding across the paper, blotting the first stroke onto that blank white space.
My Thoughts: The Sanada in this story is a bit stodgier than I like but the sheer novelty of the pairing more than makes up for it. Niou is such a great character because he can easily be catalyst for nearly any plot. Niou's attempts to shake up Sanada's worldview are interesting; it's nice to see Niou being logical instead of simply a loose cannon. The theme of calligraphy and perfection through is good too. But I particularly like the ending, even though it isn't your typical happy ending.
Added On: June 23rd, 2008

The Best Damn Thing (or not) by reposoir
Marui/Jackal, PG, ~7600 words
Summary/Except: Marui pops a bubble. He scans the area and runs off the court. The senpais don't seem to notice Jackal and his Gaijin girl standing near the clubhouse. Marui slicks back his hair and smooths his shorts. Mostly, he just frowns as Jackal grins from ear to ear.
My Thoughts: Far, far too often, Jackal and Marui are the forgotten members of Rikkai so it's great when good writers take them on. I really, really felt for Marui in this story; haven't we all been there, when we perceive a love interest as taking our best friend away? The ending, in particular, is really well-conceived. I got a wonderful glow in my heart when I read it. And the pop music bits were a lot of fun!
Added On: May 4th, 2008

Segue by panzer_kunst
Kirihara Akaya, Yanagi Renji, G, ~500 words.
Summary/Excerpt: This is the difference between Renji and Akaya: Renji says, "Forty-eight months, two weeks and five days," and Akaya says, "Four years," which is the approximate time that's elapsed since Renji had officially given up tennis.
Added: April 28th, 2008


Rokkaku Chuu


Seigaku Gakuen
Invisible to the Eyes by haruyuki
Fuji Shuusuke, PG, ~1450 words
Summary/Excerpt: “Ahh, sorry I’m late,” he says, on the first day of senbatsu, as he arrives, laiden with an extra net and boxes of tennis balls, at the court where his group has already gathered. And then, to no one in particular, he adds, “I brought an extra carton of balls, just in case certain people here happen to slice too many in half.”
My Thoughts: A story with mini scenes involving Fuji. The bit I quoted above is, by far, my favorite part of the story. Such an utterly Fuji thing for him to say and the rest of the story follows good characterization too.
Added On: May 4th, 2008

Peanuts Gakuen by cest_what
Seigaku/Peanuts Fusion, G, ~1700 words
Summary/Except: Patty scowled again. She fingered the bandana uncertainly. It had looked very cool on the shelf. It had little coiled green vipers on it, which she'd thought was neat; and it wouldn't matter that her fair hair was always in a tangle, if she started wearing a bandana.
My Thoughts: Yes, you're reading that header correctly. This story is a fusion between Prince of Tennis and the Peanuts comic. As in, the Peanuts characters are cast as the Seigaku regulars. It's brilliant and works so very well, particular Marcie as Inui and Peppermint Patty as Kaidoh. And the Golden Pair. See if you can guess which Peanuts characters are cast as them before you read. Succesful fusions are hard to do because characters don't always cross over well but that's not the case here.
Added: May 2nd, 2008
 

Akutsu/Dan
AI by scoradh
Akutsu/Dan, PG-13, ~4100 words
Summary/Excerpt: So Akutsu mumbled something that might have been 'Hi' and might have been 'I'm a badass and I rule this school' but neither one of which could have stood up in a court of law. The bell rang, Dan jerked like a marionette on a string and bounced off to class. The navy of the Yamabuki High uniform seemed to make his legs go on forever, and the blazer swamped him.
My Thoughts: Akutsu is a hard voice to get right because he comes off as such a stereotypical bully in Prince of Tennis. This makes giving him depth and retaining how he speaks difficult but this writer really nails it. I love how Akutsu feels that Dan is a bad influence on him, but what he really means is that Dan is a good influence. And Dan is great here, just as sparkly and innocent as he is in canon, but with a touch more knowledge. The slight hints to Akutsu wishing that he had a better past are perfect. Even if you don't care for this pairing, read it anyway for the characterization. You won't be sorry.
Added On: July 3rd, 2008


Inui/Kaidoh
An Element to a Set Part 01 | Part 02 by marksykins
Inui/Kaidoh, R, ~14000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: "I did not," Kaidoh hissed. "Inui-senpai has to concentrate on his studies now and I don't want to bother him. Shut up about things you don't know." Kaidoh walked faster, putting some distance between himself and the other two. He could almost feel them exchanging looks behind his head.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Secondary Link: Full text @ aparecium.com
Added On: April 29th, 2008

Dash by starlighter
Inui/Kaidoh, Not Rated, ~840 words.
Summary/Excerpt: He goes back to Inui-sempai, who looks up from his Math book with no surprise on his face, as if he had been expecting Kaidoh all along. For all Kaidoh knows of him at this point, from all he has seen from his plays, he might.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added On: April 29th, 2008

26.6 by meiface
Inui/Kaidoh, PG, ~740 words.
Summary/Excerpt: It may have seemed like an unlikely source, especially since the other boy was younger. But he was straightforward and often presented the simplest solutions to complicated problems. There was none of that "but how do you feel" crap, or any of it "maybe you should sit down and talk it out" nonsense. He and Kaidoh often thought alike.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added On: April 29th, 2008

Moving Forward by trinityhelix
Inui/Yanagi, Inui/Kaidoh, R, multi-chapter
Summary: Inui once predicted that seven years into the future, Kaidoh would be unbeatable in the tennis circuit. He was off by only six months.
Secondary Link: Full text @ trinitycross
Added: April 28th, 2008


Inui/Yanagi
Moving Forward by trinityhelix
Inui/Yanagi, Inui/Kaidoh, R, multi-chapter
Summary: Inui once predicted that seven years into the future, Kaidoh would be unbeatable in the tennis circuit. He was off by only six months.
Secondary Link: Full text @ trinitycross
Added: April 28th, 2008


Kaidoh/Momoshiro
Five resolutions made and broken by Momoshiro Takeshi by kishmet
Momoshiro, Kaidoh/Momoshiro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Except: "I bet... I bet you... you were staring at me!" says Momo triumphantly. One of his secret weapons when there's no other way out is to blame the person blaming him for the exact thing they're blaming him for. That hadn't worked out so well when he'd broken his mother's best lamp, but he feels confident that it will prove its effectiveness one of these days.
My Thoughts: This story made me grin so very, very much. I love kishmet's humor and the way she writes Momoshiro; it's so free and easy and Momo's so endearing. It was fun to see how Momo breaks each of his resolutions and the very end bit is just the icing on the cake.
Added On: May 6th, 2008


Marui/Jackal
The Best Damn Thing (or not) by reposoir
Marui/Jackal, PG, ~7600 words
Summary/Except: Marui pops a bubble. He scans the area and runs off the court. The senpais don't seem to notice Jackal and his Gaijin girl standing near the clubhouse. Marui slicks back his hair and smooths his shorts. Mostly, he just frowns as Jackal grins from ear to ear.
My Thoughts: Far, far too often, Jackal and Marui are the forgotten members of Rikkai so it's great when good writers take them on. I really, really felt for Marui in this story; haven't we all been there, when we perceive a love interest as taking our best friend away? The ending, in particular, is really well-conceived. I got a wonderful glow in my heart when I read it. And the pop music bits were a lot of fun!
Added On: May 4th, 2008


Niou/Sanada
Not One Stroke by star_in_my_soup
Sanada, Niou/Sanada, R, ~8400 words
Summary/Excerpt: He ran his hand lightly over the paper that he had placed on the floor, checking to see if it was lying perfectly flat and adjusting the paperweight accordingly. Being careful to sit up straight so that his back was perpendicular to the floor, he took the brush in his hand, dipped it in the ink, and closed his eyes for a moment to focus. Then, decisively but not too quickly, he allowed his brush to begin sliding across the paper, blotting the first stroke onto that blank white space.
My Thoughts: The Sanada in this story is a bit stodgier than I like but the sheer novelty of the pairing more than makes up for it. Niou is such a great character because he can easily be catalyst for nearly any plot. Niou's attempts to shake up Sanada's worldview are interesting; it's nice to see Niou being logical instead of simply a loose cannon. The theme of calligraphy and perfection through is good too. But I particularly like the ending, even though it isn't your typical happy ending.
Added On: June 23rd, 2008
 

Akutsu Jin
AI by scoradh
Akutsu/Dan, PG-13, ~4100 words
Summary/Excerpt: So Akutsu mumbled something that might have been 'Hi' and might have been 'I'm a badass and I rule this school' but neither one of which could have stood up in a court of law. The bell rang, Dan jerked like a marionette on a string and bounced off to class. The navy of the Yamabuki High uniform seemed to make his legs go on forever, and the blazer swamped him.
My Thoughts: Akutsu is a hard voice to get right because he comes off as such a stereotypical bully in Prince of Tennis. This makes giving him depth and retaining how he speaks difficult but this writer really nails it. I love how Akutsu feels that Dan is a bad influence on him, but what he really means is that Dan is a good influence. And Dan is great here, just as sparkly and innocent as he is in canon, but with a touch more knowledge. The slight hints to Akutsu wishing that he had a better past are perfect. Even if you don't care for this pairing, read it anyway for the characterization. You won't be sorry.
Added On: July 3rd, 2008


Atobe Keigo
Stop Me If You've Heard This One Bef- oh by wrangler
Atobe Keigo, Hyoutei-centric, PG-13, ~9100 words
Summary/Excerpt: Ootori checks out his form before Shishido submits it, over lunch. Atobe is crowing over his sparsely filled form and Shishido shuts up him by telling him that it's easy for the village idiot to know his career path. Ootori winces and tugs his attention away by drawing thick, red lines through most of his pros/cons list. Shishido is somewhat dismayed at the loss of Spiderman and Wizard, but he really pitches a fit when Voldemort goes too.
My Thoughts: This story is so very, very hilarious. The career lists are absolutely inspired and the banter even more so. I admit to not caring much for Hyoutei in canon but when I read stories like this one, it makes me want to re-think my apathy. And I really like Atobe's struggle between what's expected of him for his career, what he wants for his career, and why tennis is more exciting to him than economics. Seriously, start the story for the humor, stay for the thoughtful Atobe characterization.
Secondary Link: story @ tenifriends
Added On: May 27th, 2008


Fuji Shuusuke
Invisible to the Eyes by haruyuki
Fuji Shuusuke, PG, ~1450 words
Summary/Excerpt: “Ahh, sorry I’m late,” he says, on the first day of senbatsu, as he arrives, laiden with an extra net and boxes of tennis balls, at the court where his group has already gathered. And then, to no one in particular, he adds, “I brought an extra carton of balls, just in case certain people here happen to slice too many in half.”
My Thoughts: A story with mini scenes involving Fuji. The bit I quoted above is, by far, my favorite part of the story. Such an utterly Fuji thing for him to say and the rest of the story follows good characterization too.
Added On: May 4th, 2008


Inui Sadaharu
Moving Forward by trinityhelix
Inui/Yanagi, Inui/Kaidoh, R, multi-chapter
Summary: Inui once predicted that seven years into the future, Kaidoh would be unbeatable in the tennis circuit. He was off by only six months.
Secondary Link: Full text @ trinitycross
Added: April 28th, 2008


Kabaji Munehiro
Simple/Copy by brainbreaker
Kabaji Munehiro, Atobe Keigo, G, ~1600 words
Summary/Excerpt: "God! How hard can it be to follow a few simple instructions?!" That would be Atobe. But it wasn't directed to him, so it's okay to ignore it. At times like these, Kabaji simply tuned out all the extraneous noises (excluding key words like his name, or emergency words like 'help' or 'fire'); it was the best way to survive the dramatics surrounding the Hyotei tennis team, especially during this time of the year.
Added: April 28th, 2008


Kaidoh Kaoru
An Element to a Set Part 01 | Part 02 by marksykins
Inui/Kaidoh, R, ~14000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: "I did not," Kaidoh hissed. "Inui-senpai has to concentrate on his studies now and I don't want to bother him. Shut up about things you don't know." Kaidoh walked faster, putting some distance between himself and the other two. He could almost feel them exchanging looks behind his head.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Secondary Link: Full text @ aparecium.com
Added On: April 29th, 2008

Dash by starlighter
Inui/Kaidoh, Not Rated, ~840 words.
Summary/Excerpt: He goes back to Inui-sempai, who looks up from his Math book with no surprise on his face, as if he had been expecting Kaidoh all along. For all Kaidoh knows of him at this point, from all he has seen from his plays, he might.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added On: April 29th, 2008

26.6 by meiface
Inui/Kaidoh, PG, ~740 words.
Summary/Excerpt: It may have seemed like an unlikely source, especially since the other boy was younger. But he was straightforward and often presented the simplest solutions to complicated problems. There was none of that "but how do you feel" crap, or any of it "maybe you should sit down and talk it out" nonsense. He and Kaidoh often thought alike.
My Thoughts: None at this time.
Added On: April 29th, 2008


Kawamura Takashi
With No Mirror To See by lifeinwords
Kawamura Takashi, G, ~6000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: His father always told him that he was too easygoing, usually with a friendly whap upside the head. 'You've got to stand firm, Taka,' he would say, 'or people will think you're as limp as bad seaweed.'
Added: April 28th, 2008


Kirihara Akaya
Segue by panzer_kunst
Kirihara Akaya, Yanagi Renji, G, ~500 words.
Summary/Excerpt: This is the difference between Renji and Akaya: Renji says, "Forty-eight months, two weeks and five days," and Akaya says, "Four years," which is the approximate time that's elapsed since Renji had officially given up tennis.
Added: April 28th, 2008


Marui Bunta
The Best Damn Thing (or not) by reposoir
Marui/Jackal, PG, ~7600 words
Summary/Except: Marui pops a bubble. He scans the area and runs off the court. The senpais don't seem to notice Jackal and his Gaijin girl standing near the clubhouse. Marui slicks back his hair and smooths his shorts. Mostly, he just frowns as Jackal grins from ear to ear.
My Thoughts: Far, far too often, Jackal and Marui are the forgotten members of Rikkai so it's great when good writers take them on. I really, really felt for Marui in this story; haven't we all been there, when we perceive a love interest as taking our best friend away? The ending, in particular, is really well-conceived. I got a wonderful glow in my heart when I read it. And the pop music bits were a lot of fun!
Added On: May 4th, 2008


Momoshiro Takeshi
Five resolutions made and broken by Momoshiro Takeshi by kishmet
Momoshiro, Kaidoh/Momoshiro, PG, ~1500 words
Summary/Except: "I bet... I bet you... you were staring at me!" says Momo triumphantly. One of his secret weapons when there's no other way out is to blame the person blaming him for the exact thing they're blaming him for. That hadn't worked out so well when he'd broken his mother's best lamp, but he feels confident that it will prove its effectiveness one of these days.
My Thoughts: This story made me grin so very, very much. I love kishmet's humor and the way she writes Momoshiro; it's so free and easy and Momo's so endearing. It was fun to see how Momo breaks each of his resolutions and the very end bit is just the icing on the cake.
Added On: May 6th, 2008


Sanada Genichirou
Not One Stroke by star_in_my_soup
Sanada, Niou/Sanada, R, ~8400 words
Summary/Excerpt: He ran his hand lightly over the paper that he had placed on the floor, checking to see if it was lying perfectly flat and adjusting the paperweight accordingly. Being careful to sit up straight so that his back was perpendicular to the floor, he took the brush in his hand, dipped it in the ink, and closed his eyes for a moment to focus. Then, decisively but not too quickly, he allowed his brush to begin sliding across the paper, blotting the first stroke onto that blank white space.
My Thoughts: The Sanada in this story is a bit stodgier than I like but the sheer novelty of the pairing more than makes up for it. Niou is such a great character because he can easily be catalyst for nearly any plot. Niou's attempts to shake up Sanada's worldview are interesting; it's nice to see Niou being logical instead of simply a loose cannon. The theme of calligraphy and perfection through is good too. But I particularly like the ending, even though it isn't your typical happy ending.
Added On: June 23rd, 2008


Tezuka Kunimitsu
Kunimitsu's Krusaderz by whisper132
Tezuka Kunimitsu, Fuji Shuusuke, Muromachi Tohji, Mizuki Hajime, G, ~2000 words.
Summary/Excerpt: At age 10, Tezuka wanted to be a rock star. When his family was asleep, he took out his tennis racquet, put on his headphones, and air guitared himself to exhaustion, falling asleep clutching his imagined instrument. His parents would find him in the morning and think he loved tennis.
Added: April 28th, 2008


Yanagi Renji
Surfacing by haruyuki
Yanagi Renji, Inui Sadaharu, Not Rated, ~2000 words
Summary/Excerpt: If he had been forced to stop and think more about the determination emanating from the boy like a tangible aura, Renji would have associated with wind, with mountains, with the cloudless sky above them that is the clearest, most innocent blue. It’s irrational, but he knows, right then, that this was a person who would never stop working for what they wanted, would not stop until he had risen through – had understood and turned inside out – this small, isolated world, of perpendicular white lines and courts and rules as clean-cut as numbers.
My Thoughts: This is a lovely short piece with some very good Renji introspection. There are also quite a lot of flashbacks to when Renji and Inui first met each other and I'm an absolute sucker for kid flashbacks. I particular like Renji's observations of Inui, both as a kid and as a teenager, and I particularly like his "justification" at the end of the story.
Added On: May 27th, 2008

Segue by panzer_kunst
Kirihara Akaya, Yanagi Renji, G, ~500 words.
Summary/Excerpt: This is the difference between Renji and Akaya: Renji says, "Forty-eight months, two weeks and five days," and Akaya says, "Four years," which is the approximate time that's elapsed since Renji had officially given up tennis.
Added: April 28th, 2008